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She thought he loved her
He didn’t even care
He lived his life
As though she wasn’t even there

She was naive and immature
And needed some one bad
She never thought it would turn out like this
She never thought she was just a fad

A fad in his world
A pawn in his life
He never cared about her
Yet, she still couldn’t see the light

That was guiding her
Away from him
She saw him in the most perfect way
She thought he was never dim

Until it ended abruptly
She never worked it out
That he was using her
There was nothing decent he felt

No real feelings
Towards her at all
He was just waiting for her to get it
And understand it all

But she was so in love with him
That she couldn’t work it out
For if she listened to what her heart was saying
Nothing decent would turn out

So she pretended he was the one
While he played her like a game
Now she’s sorry that she didn’t listen
Now she must deal with her shame

For letting him take her hand
And drag her in the wrong direction
Now she has to deal with the pain
Her life without his affection
©2006-2009 ~LiTTi
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I really like the ending and the storiy it tells, a great poem as are many of yours.

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"All we are is dust in the wind dude."
aww, thank you, i wasnt too sure about this one :hug:

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Millie
Yeh the ending rocks, great work!

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Why is it that, as a culture, we are more comfortable seeing two men holding guns than holding hands? - Ernest Gaines
yup... that makes a whole lot of sense!!!
i feel like such a dilly pickle for even considering him likeable.. im just glad that its all over and done with now rather than later :phew:
thanks so much LiTTi.. you're a fucking awesome friend.. ('cuse the swearing.. but it adds emphasis to your awesome-ness)
i seriously dont know what i wouldve done without you
:glomp::hug:

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well done... :clap:

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I loved it as a poem, but it was so very sad to me as I can relate (only a girl leading me, not a guy) *sigh*... but lifes all better now. :)

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"You can only be betrayed by those you trust"
Love the poem.Very expressive indeed. :D

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"Those who violate the rules and fail to follow orders are lower than garbage. Those who do not care for and support their fellows are even lower than that!"
thanks so mcuh :hug:

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Millie
well, thats a VERY good thing then isnt it!!

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Millie
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :hug:

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