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Drowning Without a Raft by ~LiTTi:iconLiTTi:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Once again I am off
I知 lost with no way out
I am lost in my own little world
I知 lost with my own little pout

I知 stuck here not moving
I知 trapped here without dreaming
I知 caught here without knowing
My problems that are streaming

And flowing in the current
Of my own self-pity
I have put this all on myself
I have made myself feel shitty

I cold have changed where I was heading
Put decided not to follow the path
Instead I took my own and got lost
Now I知 drowning without a raft

I am lost in my head
And lost in my mind
I am lost in my feelings
Lost in my own tide

Scattering in and out
Unpredictable
Impulsive and uncanny
Unreliable and unchangeable

Changing every second
Changing every day
Changing when it suits me
I am a needle lost in my own hay

Such a shame I have done it
Yet I can稚 go back
Now to live in the hole I have dug
Trapped in my own little shack
©2005-2009 ~LiTTi
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~LostUnknown Sep 12, 2005, 4:48:29 AM
I like it :). You say title suggestions (all though I also think the one you have works just fine), so...

Lost
Little Shack
No Way Out
Anywhere Contained
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~funkydoryjackanory Sep 12, 2005, 4:56:01 AM
i like the line 'drowning without a raft' think you should use that as your title :) xxx well done this is good x

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~melleh Sep 12, 2005, 6:04:55 AM
Very nice! :nod:

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~LiTTi Sep 12, 2005, 3:19:22 PM
thanks melleh

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Millie
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~LiTTi Sep 12, 2005, 3:33:55 PM
thanks so much, that is such a better title thanks :hug:

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Millie
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~LiTTi Sep 12, 2005, 3:36:28 PM
I had lost already as a title so i couldn't have 2 :'( sad story, so u like the new one for now? thanks :hug:

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Millie
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~LiTTi Sep 12, 2005, 4:29:34 PM
thanks :hug:

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Millie
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~Foopy Sep 12, 2005, 5:55:00 PM
I know the feeling, sometimes I feel so lost in my own thoughts and emotions the world seems unreal. I talk to myself a LOT (PERFECTLY NORMAL DAMMIT) and I end up with tons of thoughts, ideas and reflections none of which make it anywhere except the little storage shelves in my head. I think about everything possible...I'm not sure why. Im a semi-insomniac, cant sleep w/o at least 3 hours lying in bed and im bored as hell, so I think. My brain is so chock full of random thoughts and tangents I can't reason straight sometimes. I can relate to this +fav.

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